I just want you to be aware that the Rosella story in NOT a final draft - I don't even know if I should consider it a first draft. However, I really would like unbiased feedback, so please feel free to tell me what you think the story is lacking.
Sorry if the pages are few and far between, I am trying not to get ahead of myself. If I post too much, I will be out of typed material =)
Also, I post the story by page numbers in the Word document, and if you want to start at the very beginning, then you would have to go to the earliest post.
